20 October 2009
Mystery character
He graced his audience with his slick moves on the dance floor. His facial features, were odd, noticeable, but could never be hidden and was always recognizable. His voice, captured us all with his hits. He influenced people from across the world with his creativity and left a mark in this world as a legend.
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More "showing," less "telling." 8/10
Instead of saying his facial features are "odd," describe them. Same for his dance moves.
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